作文范文精讲:玩游戏赢的时候
“playing a game is fun only when you win .”do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
some people argue tha t athletes , while playing games ,should adher e to the principle“ friendship first , competition second , ”and that that is the true sportsman ship .
personally , i disagree with this point of view . there is no denying that competitors should be friendly with each othe r . howeve r , the prima ry conce rn of every player , af ter hard tr aining for a year or two , is to win the game . his/ her sole motivation , eithe r during the t raining or in the race , is prompted by a looming hope and a prospective championship . be it a chess game or a competition of weight-lifting or a r ace of a hundr ed-met re dash , the case is always t rue . if he/ she wins the game , high r ewards , flowers and honour will pile upon him/ he r . i f he/ she loses once or twice , he/ she will become les s courageous for the third time . however , several losses may beat him/ her down , and his/ he r next battle, if he/ she is da ring to fight , will probably be a fiasco .
so , in my mind , the fun or happines s of playing a game lies in the athlet e’s ultimate achievement of the goal . we all know napoleon’s famou s saying that a soldier who does not have the ambition to become a mars hal is not a r eal soldie r . i agree that an unambitious a thlete is not a real athlete .
cet6六级作文结构分析：
· some people’s a rgue —“ friendship first , competition
second”= t rue spor tsmanship
· my argue
* primary conce rn of every player — to win the game
* motivated by championship
* sever al losses — fiasco
· conclu sion
* fu n or happiness in ultimate achievement
* unambitious athlete — not a real athlete
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cet6六级作文内容分析：
本文是一篇议论文, 作者的论点打破了“ 友谊第一, 比赛第二”的常规原则, 而认为比赛就是要赢, 文中充满了竞争意识, 但说理性很强, 很难让人不信服。在结尾段中借用了拿破仑的名言“ 不想当元帅的士兵不是一个真正的士兵”, 并依此证明“没有雄心的运动员就不是一个真正的运动员”。此文很值得六级和托福应试者学习。
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cet6六级作文万能句型：
adhe re to = follow
spor tsmanship n . 运动员精神
there is no denying tha t . . . 不可否认
be f riendly with 与友好
prima ry concern 主要关切的事
be prompted by a looming hope and a prospective championship受到一种隐约的希望和未来冠军的激励
be it a chess game . . .= whethe r it be a ches s game . . .这是一让步状语从句, 句中谓语为虚拟语气
weight-lif ting 举重
a hunde red-met re dash 百米赛跑
become less cour ageous 锐气顿减
fiasco n . 惨败
napoleon’s famous saying that a soldier who does not
have the ambition to become a ma rshal is not a real soldier拿破仑的.名言“ 不想当元帅的士兵不是一个真正的士兵”
unambitious a . 无雄心的
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